Bug 54478 - Clarity & Grammar issue on front page of LibreOffice.org
Summary: Clarity & Grammar issue on front page of LibreOffice.org
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: LibreOffice
Classification: Unclassified
Component: WWW (show other bugs)
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unspecified
Hardware: Other All
: medium normal
Assignee: WWW Bug Forward
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Reported: 2012-09-04 05:16 UTC by David
Modified: 2012-11-10 07:15 UTC (History)
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Description David 2012-09-04 05:16:35 UTC 
This is a graphic that shows up on the homepage...


https://www.libreoffice.org/assets/Shared/LibOWebsiteBannersDonationEnglish400px.png


"operational running" doesn't make sense & isn't proper grammar
Comment 1 Mas 2012-11-03 17:26:12 UTC 
I agree, I am going to send this to the website team to update

The image is located at the top right hand corner of

http://www.libreoffice.org/
Comment 2 Andras Timar 2012-11-04 10:59:28 UTC 
Suggestion: ... to fund our operating costs
Comment 3 Marc Pare 2012-11-05 04:52:15 UTC 
(In reply to comment #1)
> I agree, I am going to send this to the website team to update
> 
> The image is located at the top right hand corner of
> 
> http://www.libreoffice.org/

This should really have been sent to the Marketing Team, but OK.

Considering it must fit the space allowed by the image (approx. 72 characters), some suggestions:


"Consider donating to LibreOffice to fund our infrastructure and ..."

or

"Consider donating to LibreOffice to help fund our services and more!"

or

"Help us develop and grow LibreOffice with your generous donations ..."

or

"LibreOffice is growing with your generous contributions ..."

or

"Consider donating to LibreOffice development, infrastructure and ..."

Cheers,

Marc
Comment 4 Marc Pare 2012-11-10 07:15:57 UTC 
The button has been modified with ""Help us develop and grow LibreOffice with your generous donations ..."

Marc